A redação do ENEM: uma análise das possibilidades do trabalho com a língua portuguesa na sala de aula

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Ano de defesa: 2024
Autor(a) principal: Sousa, Ana Paula Oliveira lattes
Orientador(a): Vieira , Ilma Socorro Gonçalves lattes
Banca de defesa: Vieira, Ilma Socorro Gonçalves, Galvão, Flávia Motta de Paula, Gonçalves , Letícia de Souza
Tipo de documento: Dissertação
Tipo de acesso: Acesso aberto
Idioma: por
Instituição de defesa: Universidade Federal de Goiás
Programa de Pós-Graduação: Programa de Pós-graduação em Ensino na Educação Básica (CEPAE)
Departamento: Centro de Ensino e Pesquisa Aplicada à Educação - CEPAE (RMG)
País: Brasil
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Link de acesso: http://repositorio.bc.ufg.br/tede/handle/tede/13451
Resumo: This paper presents a research conducted in the Stricto sensu Professional Master's Degree Program in Teaching in Basic Education, at the Center for Teaching and Research Applied to Education (PPGEEB/CEPAE), Federal University of Goiás (UFG),within the research line Theoretical-Methodological Conceptions and Teaching Practices, between the years 2021 and 2024. Given the essays results of the National High School Exam (Enem) between the years 2019 and 2021, according to INEP data,and the decreasing index of essays scoring 1000, the proposal to develop this study emerged, aiming to investigate why the number of Enem essays scoring 1000 has been decreasing each year and what is the relationship between students' performance and the educational, social, and economic context experienced in our country. For this research, we use excellent essays analyses, as well as texts from 3rd year students of Technical High School who were preparing to take the exam in 2023. To support the work, the theoretical basis includes: Bakhtin (2016), Passarelli (2013?), Possenti (2002), Geraldi (2005), Plato and Fiorin (2000), Candido (2011), Colomer (2017), Andruetto (2017), as well as normative documents, such as National Curriculum Parameters – PCN (1997) and Common National Curricular Base – BNCC (2017), among others. Also, this research is justified by the intention to understand how Portuguese Language and Essay teachers work with texts in the classroom and how they prepare students for the Enem and, futhermore, if investment in reading and literature improves textual comprehension and the writing of argumentative essays. The methodological approach was developed through documentary analysis and participatory action research, having as analysis corpus six Enem essays scoring 1000 (from the years 2019, 2020, and 2021), as well as fourteen essays from Technical High School students who took the exam in 2023, with the researcher's interaction with the students of the chosen field school as the research locus.During the field activities, questionnaires were applied to the students, in addition to textual production and, finally, the essays were handed in with grades from two graders – the class teacher and the researcher. The educational product is the PodEdu podcast, which will be available on Spotify – a free platform that, in addition to providing music streaming services, also offers podcasts. There will be two episodes dedicated to the discussion on education and Enem essay, with interviews with Portuguese Language and Essay teachers and students who had successful scores in the exam. Therefore, the results of the documentary and field research, combined with the interviews from the media product, brought significant insight to the understanding of the bottlenecks related to textual production in the final year of Basic Education.
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spelling Vieira , Ilma Socorro Gonçalveshttp://lattes.cnpq.br/7504401268469781Vieira, Ilma Socorro GonçalvesGalvão, Flávia Motta de PaulaGonçalves , Letícia de Souzahttp://lattes.cnpq.br/1682999498099946Sousa, Ana Paula Oliveira2024-10-02T17:06:49Z2024-10-02T17:06:49Z2024-06-07SOUSA, A. P. O. A redação do ENEM: uma análise das possibilidades do trabalho com a língua portuguesa na sala de aula. 2024. 194 f. Dissertação (Mestrado em Ensino na Educação Básica) - Centro de Ensino e Pesquisa Aplicada à Educação, Universidade Federal de Goiás, Goiânia, 2024.http://repositorio.bc.ufg.br/tede/handle/tede/13451This paper presents a research conducted in the Stricto sensu Professional Master's Degree Program in Teaching in Basic Education, at the Center for Teaching and Research Applied to Education (PPGEEB/CEPAE), Federal University of Goiás (UFG),within the research line Theoretical-Methodological Conceptions and Teaching Practices, between the years 2021 and 2024. Given the essays results of the National High School Exam (Enem) between the years 2019 and 2021, according to INEP data,and the decreasing index of essays scoring 1000, the proposal to develop this study emerged, aiming to investigate why the number of Enem essays scoring 1000 has been decreasing each year and what is the relationship between students' performance and the educational, social, and economic context experienced in our country. For this research, we use excellent essays analyses, as well as texts from 3rd year students of Technical High School who were preparing to take the exam in 2023. To support the work, the theoretical basis includes: Bakhtin (2016), Passarelli (2013?), Possenti (2002), Geraldi (2005), Plato and Fiorin (2000), Candido (2011), Colomer (2017), Andruetto (2017), as well as normative documents, such as National Curriculum Parameters – PCN (1997) and Common National Curricular Base – BNCC (2017), among others. Also, this research is justified by the intention to understand how Portuguese Language and Essay teachers work with texts in the classroom and how they prepare students for the Enem and, futhermore, if investment in reading and literature improves textual comprehension and the writing of argumentative essays. The methodological approach was developed through documentary analysis and participatory action research, having as analysis corpus six Enem essays scoring 1000 (from the years 2019, 2020, and 2021), as well as fourteen essays from Technical High School students who took the exam in 2023, with the researcher's interaction with the students of the chosen field school as the research locus.During the field activities, questionnaires were applied to the students, in addition to textual production and, finally, the essays were handed in with grades from two graders – the class teacher and the researcher. The educational product is the PodEdu podcast, which will be available on Spotify – a free platform that, in addition to providing music streaming services, also offers podcasts. There will be two episodes dedicated to the discussion on education and Enem essay, with interviews with Portuguese Language and Essay teachers and students who had successful scores in the exam. Therefore, the results of the documentary and field research, combined with the interviews from the media product, brought significant insight to the understanding of the bottlenecks related to textual production in the final year of Basic Education.Este trabalho apresenta uma pesquisa desenvolvida no Mestrado Profissional Stricto sensu do Programa de Pós-Graduação em Ensino na Educação Básica, do Centro de Ensino e Pesquisa Aplicada à Educação (PPGEEB/CEPAE), da Universidade Federal de Goiás (UFG), dentro da linha de pesquisa Concepções Teórico-Metodológicas e Práticas Docentes, entre os anos de 2021 e 2024. Diante dos resultados obtidos nas redações do Enem entre os anos de 2019 e 2021, de acordo com dados do INEP, e do índice decrescente de textos notas 1000, surgiu a proposta de desenvolver esse estudo, que tem como objetivo investigar por que os números de redação nota 1000 do Enem têm caído a cada ano e qual a relação do desempenho dos estudantes com o contexto educacional, social e econômico vivido no nosso país. Para a pesquisa, utilizamos a análise de redações de excelência do exame, assim como textos de alunos da 3ª série do Ensino Médio Técnico que se preparavam para fazer a prova, no ano de 2023. Para fundamentar o trabalho, a base teórica contempla: Bakhtin (2016), Passarelli (2013?), Possenti (2002), Geraldi (2005), Platão e Fiorin (2000), Candido (2011), Colomer (2017), Andruetto (2017), além de documentos normativos, como Parâmetros Curriculares Nacionais – PCN (1997) e Base Nacional Comum Curricular – BNCC (2017), entre outros. Essa pesquisa justifica-se, também, pela intenção de compreender como os professores de Língua Portuguesa e Redação trabalham o texto na sala de aula e como preparam o aluno para o Enem e, ainda, se o investimento em leitura e literatura facilita a compreensão textual e a escrita de textos dissertativo argumentativos. O percurso metodológico foi desenvolvido por meio de análise documental e da pesquisa-ação participante, tendo como corpus de análise seis redações nota 1000 do Enem (dos anos de 2019, 2020 e 2021), além de quatorze redações de alunos do Ensino Médio Técnico que fizeram o exame no ano de 2023, sendo que houve interação da pesquisadora com os alunos da escola-campo escolhida como lócus da pesquisa. Durante as atividades em campo, foram aplicados questionários aos alunos, além da produção textual e, por fim, a entrega das redações com as notas das duas corretoras – a professora da turma e a pesquisadora. O produto educacional é um podcast com o nome PodEdu, que ficará disponível no Spotify – uma plataforma gratuita que, além de disponibilizar serviços de streaming de música, também oferece podcasts. Serão dois episódios destinados ao debate sobre educação e redação do Enem, com entrevistas de professores de Língua Portuguesa e Redação e com alunos que tiveram notas exitosas no exame. Sendo assim, os resultados da pesquisa documental e de campo, somados às entrevistas do produto midiático, trouxeram apontamentos significativos para o trabalho de compreensão acerca dos gargalos relacionados à produção textual na última série da Educação Básica.OutroporUniversidade Federal de GoiásPrograma de Pós-graduação em Ensino na Educação Básica (CEPAE)UFGBrasilCentro de Ensino e Pesquisa Aplicada à Educação - CEPAE (RMG)Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives 4.0 Internationalinfo:eu-repo/semantics/openAccessRedaçãoEnemLíngua portuguesaLeituraPodcastEssayPortuguese languageReadingCIENCIAS HUMANAS::EDUCACAOA redação do ENEM: uma análise das possibilidades do trabalho com a língua portuguesa na sala de aulainfo:eu-repo/semantics/publishedVersioninfo:eu-repo/semantics/masterThesisreponame:Repositório Institucional da UFGinstname:Universidade Federal de Goiás (UFG)instacron:UFGLICENSElicense.txtlicense.txttext/plain; charset=utf-81748http://repositorio.bc.ufg.br/tede/bitstreams/f4efafea-bb59-40f6-823b-30876c66a8bd/download8a4605be74aa9ea9d79846c1fba20a33MD51CC-LICENSElicense_rdflicense_rdfapplication/rdf+xml; charset=utf-8805http://repositorio.bc.ufg.br/tede/bitstreams/d111fdd7-d79e-444e-95e2-0500adbc2df8/download4460e5956bc1d1639be9ae6146a50347MD52ORIGINALDissertação - Ana Paula Oliveira Sousa - 2024.pdfDissertação - Ana Paula Oliveira Sousa - 2024.pdfapplication/pdf5511491http://repositorio.bc.ufg.br/tede/bitstreams/a2c47de1-a805-41f8-ab89-49f9b0246dc0/downloadb4a80d7a8dfb33698e0a23a4ec536471MD53tede/134512024-10-02 14:06:49.938http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/4.0/Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives 4.0 Internationalopen.accessoai:repositorio.bc.ufg.br:tede/13451http://repositorio.bc.ufg.br/tedeRepositório InstitucionalPUBhttps://repositorio.bc.ufg.br/tedeserver/oai/requestgrt.bc@ufg.bropendoar:oai:repositorio.bc.ufg.br:tede/12342024-10-02T17:06:49Repositório Institucional da UFG - Universidade Federal de Goiás (UFG)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title A redação do ENEM: uma análise das possibilidades do trabalho com a língua portuguesa na sala de aula
spellingShingle A redação do ENEM: uma análise das possibilidades do trabalho com a língua portuguesa na sala de aula
Sousa, Ana Paula Oliveira
Redação
Enem
Língua portuguesa
Leitura
Podcast
Essay
Portuguese language
Reading
CIENCIAS HUMANAS::EDUCACAO
title_short A redação do ENEM: uma análise das possibilidades do trabalho com a língua portuguesa na sala de aula
title_full A redação do ENEM: uma análise das possibilidades do trabalho com a língua portuguesa na sala de aula
title_fullStr A redação do ENEM: uma análise das possibilidades do trabalho com a língua portuguesa na sala de aula
title_full_unstemmed A redação do ENEM: uma análise das possibilidades do trabalho com a língua portuguesa na sala de aula
title_sort A redação do ENEM: uma análise das possibilidades do trabalho com a língua portuguesa na sala de aula
author Sousa, Ana Paula Oliveira
author_facet Sousa, Ana Paula Oliveira
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contributor_str_mv Vieira , Ilma Socorro Gonçalves
Vieira, Ilma Socorro Gonçalves
Galvão, Flávia Motta de Paula
Gonçalves , Letícia de Souza
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Enem
Língua portuguesa
Leitura
Podcast
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Enem
Língua portuguesa
Leitura
Podcast
Essay
Portuguese language
Reading
CIENCIAS HUMANAS::EDUCACAO
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Portuguese language
Reading
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description This paper presents a research conducted in the Stricto sensu Professional Master's Degree Program in Teaching in Basic Education, at the Center for Teaching and Research Applied to Education (PPGEEB/CEPAE), Federal University of Goiás (UFG),within the research line Theoretical-Methodological Conceptions and Teaching Practices, between the years 2021 and 2024. Given the essays results of the National High School Exam (Enem) between the years 2019 and 2021, according to INEP data,and the decreasing index of essays scoring 1000, the proposal to develop this study emerged, aiming to investigate why the number of Enem essays scoring 1000 has been decreasing each year and what is the relationship between students' performance and the educational, social, and economic context experienced in our country. For this research, we use excellent essays analyses, as well as texts from 3rd year students of Technical High School who were preparing to take the exam in 2023. To support the work, the theoretical basis includes: Bakhtin (2016), Passarelli (2013?), Possenti (2002), Geraldi (2005), Plato and Fiorin (2000), Candido (2011), Colomer (2017), Andruetto (2017), as well as normative documents, such as National Curriculum Parameters – PCN (1997) and Common National Curricular Base – BNCC (2017), among others. Also, this research is justified by the intention to understand how Portuguese Language and Essay teachers work with texts in the classroom and how they prepare students for the Enem and, futhermore, if investment in reading and literature improves textual comprehension and the writing of argumentative essays. The methodological approach was developed through documentary analysis and participatory action research, having as analysis corpus six Enem essays scoring 1000 (from the years 2019, 2020, and 2021), as well as fourteen essays from Technical High School students who took the exam in 2023, with the researcher's interaction with the students of the chosen field school as the research locus.During the field activities, questionnaires were applied to the students, in addition to textual production and, finally, the essays were handed in with grades from two graders – the class teacher and the researcher. The educational product is the PodEdu podcast, which will be available on Spotify – a free platform that, in addition to providing music streaming services, also offers podcasts. There will be two episodes dedicated to the discussion on education and Enem essay, with interviews with Portuguese Language and Essay teachers and students who had successful scores in the exam. Therefore, the results of the documentary and field research, combined with the interviews from the media product, brought significant insight to the understanding of the bottlenecks related to textual production in the final year of Basic Education.
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